Reading: Extraordinary Earthworms

Here is my presentation about extraordinary earthworms.

I used information from my text.

Recount Writing: Bike riding

WALT write our ideas in order using timewords.

On Saturday morning I rode my bike to my Uncle’s house in Kaikohe.  I went there to play with Rio and Josiah.  

They live next to my uncle’s house.  

First, I went to get water.  

Next, I went to get my bike outside on the rack.  

After that, I said to my koro and nana, “Bye.”  

They said, “Bye,” back to me.  

Then I got my bike out of the rack.  

Finally I got there and played cops and robbers.

Recount Writing-On the weekend

My Treaty of Waitangi video

I have been learning to use Explain Everything to record and share my ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

Recount Writing-My draft

This is the draft copy of my writing

Recount Writing-On Saturday

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing

I went to a creek with my aunty.  It was on Saturday.  

We went on a log swing and we jumped in the water.  

I was excited. 

I said to my mum, “I went to the creek with my aunty. 

It was fun.”

First, we had lunch with my mum.  Next, we went to play in the water.  After that, we went to the shop to get some bread.  Then we went to the beach.

Finally, we went home to play outside with my mum.

The Treaty of Waitangi

WALT write our ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

The Treaty Of Waitangi

The Maori people were in NZ first.

Then the English people came.

They started having problems.

The Maori people got help from the King.

The King sent two men to help.

William Hobson and James Busby 

and the Maori chiefs made some rules.

They agreed with the rules and 

they signed the Treaty.

The Treaty helped to keep NZ safe.

It was called the Treaty of Waitangi.