Recount Writing-On Saturday

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing

I went to a creek with my aunty.  It was on Saturday.  

We went on a log swing and we jumped in the water.  

I was excited. 

I said to my mum, “I went to the creek with my aunty. 

It was fun.”

First, we had lunch with my mum.  Next, we went to play in the water.  After that, we went to the shop to get some bread.  Then we went to the beach.

Finally, we went home to play outside with my mum.