At Waipapa Warehouse
On Sunday me my brother and my Grandmama went to Waipapa warehouse. First we went to the shop and got an
ice cream. Me and my brother had chocolate ice cream and our Grandmama had lime ice cream. After that my Grandmama stopped at the toilet and asked us if we needed to go to the toilet and we said no and she said well i do. Next Grandmama came back into the car. Then we left the toilets and went to the warehouse and walked in the warehouse and went to pick a toy. I got a basketball and my brother wanted to copy me so he got a basketball and then we went to pay for them and our Grandmama bort us some lollies and bubble gum. Later on we left the warehouse And had some lunch. It was yummy.
Finally we went home and I was as happy as a clown.
Here is my Writing sample for Term 2021.
I think my writing has improved because I can use the correct structure in my writing.
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